P1: No need for title case in "First National Tour" P3, S1: Needs comma after her name P3, S1: No need to capitalize "Nominated" P3, S2: No need for title case in "First National Tour" P4, S2: Needs a "of" after "title roles" P4, S2: Spell out "Les Misérables" P5, S1: Should be "cast in," not "cast for" P6, S2: "Number one" according to...? Ratings? People's Choice Awards? P7: Needs a comma after Janet Dickinson's name P8: No need to repeat the word "story" in two consecutive sentences P9: The quote should start in its own paragraph
GENERAL NOTES: Inconsistent use of commas within quotes; inconsistent spelling of Mamma Mia; inconsistent use of quote marks vs. italics
Does the PR firm not have an editor? Or is this BWW's doing?
"This thread reads like a series of White House memos." — Mister Matt
"TheatreDiva90016 - another good reason to frequent these boards less."<<>>
“I hesitate to give this line of discussion the validation it so desperately craves by perpetuating it, but the light from logic is getting further and further away with your every successive post.” <<>>
-whatever2
For Violet- Jane Blass, Janet Dickinson For Judy- Holly Davis, Ashley Moniz For Doralee- Holly Davis, Ryah Nixon For Hart- Wayne Schroder For Roz- Janet Dickinson, Madeleine Doherty For Joe- Paul Castree