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Thoughts on MERRILY WE ROLL ALONG's original framing device

Thoughts on MERRILY WE ROLL ALONG's original framing device

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Mr. Nowack
#1Thoughts on MERRILY WE ROLL ALONG's original framing device
Posted: 4/19/15 at 11:27pm

Thoughts on MERRILY WE ROLL ALONG's original framing device


I know there are literally oodles of threads discussing the multiple incarnations and their pros and cons, but I was specifically interested on peoples' thoughts on this aspect.


For those of you who saw the original version and any of the revisions, did you prefer it with or without the graduation frame? I think it's so chilling and effective on the OBC and wish the current licensed version included it even as an optional thing.


Have the authors ever given a reason why it's never been used again? 


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Updated On: 4/20/15 at 11:27 PM

Wilmingtom
#2Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 12:13am

I beliveve they felt that introducing the cast as youngters and then asking the audience to buy them as middle aged adults in the following scene was too jarring.

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#2Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 12:47am

I guess that's a valid concern. I think it could probably be overcome if they tried however.


Even if "The Hills Of Tomorrow" only appeared at the end. Better than not at all.


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#3Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 1:20am

I've probably written some variation on this post about thirty times but I think the framing device is essential to making the story more than a cautionary tale. The opening scene is slightly less important than the closing scene, to be sure. All it needs to communicate to us is that Frank is having a breakdown, and we're about to find out why. It's the ending scene that's so important because it provides closure for the audience in regard to where Frank's breakdown is going. Without the framing device at all, the actual plot of the play ends with Mary walking out, Gussie throwing iodine in Meg's face, and Frank bemoaning the tatters of his life (in the script he actually gets down on his knees and screams "WHYYYY", but thankfully every production I've ever seen of the revised version omits that).


With the framing device, the same thing happens, but we get the follow-up: he goes to his old high school to give a bitter speech on how life screws up your plans, and then has a rush of flashbacks and comes to the epiphany, at the end, that what really mattered was what he had with Mary and Charley. You hear it on the OBC in the final speech, when Old Frank echoes Young Frank in thanking Charley, which I agree is absolutely chilling, and also provides us with a very necessary insight: finally, he's realized what we've wanted him to realize for the entire show. He's redeemed, and now there's some hope of him getting his life back on track. I think I like that.


I think the only real concern with the framing device is the degree to which it delays the show. First there's the overture, then there's Hills of Tomorrow, then Frank gives his speech, which is interrupted by the four-minute title song, and then finally there's Rich And Happy (That Who? never heard of it), which actually sounds like an opening number. It's just a trick of making the graduation scene swift and entertaining enough to feel like a prelude, I think.


Also, I might be in the minority but I never minded the youthful cast, it just needs to be very clearly defined to the audience what exactly is going on. And honestly, casting the show older always feels off to me, especially when they get into the second act. Lonny Price was 22 when he was in it, and his performance of Franklin Shepherd Inc is still the most searing one on record.

Updated On: 4/20/15 at 01:20 AM

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#4Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 3:49am

I will always believe that the best version of the show as a whole was the final Broadway version. Yes, I wish "Growing Up" and "The Blob" were part of the product, but the version in which they appear is still inferior to the final Broadway product. They tried so hard to make the show work and I think they succeeded in the show on paper: the libretto and score were phenomenal by the time they opened (The first few previews were VERY rocky - laughable, even). The cast was astounding. If only Hal Prince had done his part. With better concept and costume designs (definitely NOT performing the show like a high school production and charge top Broadway prices - that surely turned many audience members off) the show could have been a hit. And to this day "It's A Hit" is full of irony never intended.


The framing device is the only was to make the show feel like a whole. Without it there is no plot of intention, it is simply dramatic irony. When you end with Frank's realization in the reprise of "Hills of Tomorrow" the character actually makes growth. Without it, it's just an unlikable character destroying his life and estranging his far more likable friends. And not even the most stunning rendition of "Growing Up" can redeem him.


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#5Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 4:08am

I only just recently saw the revised version onstage for the first time and while the score still astounds with its brilliance I was shocked at how corny and boring the scenes were. The beginning and ending seem so loose, starting out of nowhere and ending without much closure. THAT is the product of 30+ years of revisions??


I wish I could go back and see the OBC to compare. At least I got to hear the score live though. And the cast worked well with the lousy material.


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Fantod
#6Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 4:18am

I'm actually in the minuscule to nonexistent camp that thinks that the show actually works. I find the book structure to be fascinating and a strangely compelling way to write a show. I actually find that the main problem with the show is the dialogue itself. George Furth is just a bad playwright in my book, and has no clue how to write natural sounding dialogue. Better than the musical is the Kaufman and Hart play, where the dialogue is anything but awful.

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#7Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 4:23am

The dialogue is all terrible in my opinion. I think the songs themselves work individually but as soon as the music stops my mind wanders.


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#8Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 6:14am

There are some epic one-liners from Mary which make me laugh every time: "What do you really do?  I really drink." and "I had to borrow this dress from the guy upstairs"- in that book.


 


But I'm with Mr Kringas on the framing device.  I think that through the juxtaposition of the young and the old the show earns huge poignancy.  I agree with Sally 100% about the best version.


 


Nowadays I get the feeling that people chop the show around because they want to be seen as the guys who "fixed" Merrily.


 

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#9Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 6:14am

There are some epic one-liners from Mary which make me laugh every time: "What do you really do?  I really drink." and "I had to borrow this dress from the guy upstairs"- in that book.


 


But I'm with Mr Kringas on the framing device.  I think that through the juxtaposition of the young and the old the show earns huge poignancy.  I agree with Sally 100% about the best version.


 


Nowadays I get the feeling that people chop the show around because they want to be seen as the guys who "fixed" Merrily.


 

Buddy Plummer2
#10Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 6:40am

Can I propose something crazy? Not doing the show backwards, but slightly rearranged?


Here's the order as I see it:


overture


the hills of tomorrow/ graduation speech


merrily we roll along


(then we flashback to the 1950s and watch the characters go from just starting in the business to frank's divorce)


opening doors


bobby and Jackie and jack


(some scene between Frank and Beth showing their booming relationship)


not a day goes by


The blob/ good thing going


Gussie's good thing going/ it's a hit


(some scene between Gussie and Frank where she makes her move on opening night and Beth catches Frank in a compromising position)/ Growing Up


not a day goes by reprise


Now you know


- intermission -


(we then flash forward to the present day, just before the graduation)


that frank/ rich and happy (call me crazy but I like these two songs together: one showing what frank's become and the other showng what he could have been. Plus by fast forwarding in the middle, after growing with the characters you get all these questions: how did Frank end up with Gussie? When did mary become a lush, where is charlie? It sets up the rest of the act):


Old Friends


growing up


like it was


franklin Shepard inc


(we're now present day in a somewhat nowhere space. I thought this would be a great place for a scene between a grown up Frank jr and Frank. Which then leads into flashing back to:)


our time (also, I love the encores version of the scene before this with the three meeting for the first time... Just had to get that out there.)


We then flash back to the present: the graduation (which I always thought was Frank jr's class). As Frank finishes his speech, and the chorus sings the hills of tomorrow, we'd see Frank on the roof where it all began, as mary and charlie appear from the shadows.


Yes, the device of a show going completely backwards is lost. But in my opinion it's a device which alienates more than it helps. Plus, in its place we get the chance to see the characters grow instead of recede, we still answer the question of what happened to screw everything up, and by jumping back and forth a bit in the second half, we still get our time as a finale and that Frank as something of an opening. We see the promise they had vs. what they became. And honestly, isn't that the point?


I know no one woule ever sign off on this as a version (I dub it roll along we merrily), but in the space of my imagination, its a great solution to a troubled show.

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#11Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 7:42am

i have always loved the original book and sequence of songs that make so much more sense...if only it had been directed with more polish...Hal Prince is a genius but not here...not this time...if one only listens to the OBC cd you hear musical perfection in the order the songs are sung...when i saw the revised production proudly put forth by George Furth i wanted to go up to him in the audience after the performance and confront him..."How dare you sir!"  

Cesare2
#12Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 10:46am

I saw the original production three times, including the first preview.  The show was about more than Frank, Charley, and Mary. It was also about how this country changed from Sputnik and Camelot to the present. Now it's basically just about Frank, Charley, and Mary. I also miss "The Hills of Tomorrow" and the high school graduation scenes.  The final scene was devastating.


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#13Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 11:02am

I've always loved the original production.  I like the high school theatre concept, but i think that having a bunch of adults prancing around like a high school production doesn't quite work.  I'd like to see someone try a production of all super duper talented high schoolers with an adult Frank to give his speech at the beginning and end.  They could do this by having the students burst from their graduation ceremony and into Frank's breakdown (sort of a recap of his life).


Maybe some narration from the older Frank may help.  He could act as some sort of director for his life throughout.

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gypsy101
#14Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 11:30am

Icecreambenjamin, I didn't see the original production (because I was born 11 years after it closed) but I thought the cast was young people (around college age) playing adults getting younger. And that's what didn't work. The only production I've seen is the one from England late in 2013 that was shown in musicals, which I thought was a very good production. The main three were a little older than I would have liked but I thought they were terrific and even if they didn't look young enough at the end, I think they captured the spirit of youth. I like the song "The Hills of Tomorrow" and the framing device seems kind of necessary from a dramatic standpoint. The show without it shows such a dismal and depressing future. But I love the score.


"Contentment, it seems, simply happens. It appears accompanied by no bravos and no tears."

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Scripps2
#15Thoughts on MERRILY's original framing device
Posted: 4/20/15 at 2:28pm

With.


Definitely with.


Although I've seen it many times and will see it many more, the rewritten version is twee in comparison to versions with the book-ends.