New play feedback request: Life’s a Drag

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I recently finished writing the script for my play, Life's a Drag. I would really appreciate any feedback or critiques that you may have to improve the script, in order to help me write my second draft. Even if just for the first few pages. If you could please either leave comments below, PM me, I'd very much appreciate it.

Here is the Google Docs link:

Thank you to everyone in advance for your help!

Updated On: 8/18/19 at 06:36 PM