And while you are entitled to like or dislike any show, you should at least make sure that you understand how theater (or even storytelling works. Just sayin'.
If we're not having fun, then why are we doing it?
These are DISCUSSION boards, not mutual admiration boards. Discussion only occurs when we are willing to hear what others are thinking, regardless of whether it is alignment to our own thoughts.
BTW.....I took my own group of HS kids, around the same time, and many of them loved it.
If we're not having fun, then why are we doing it?
These are DISCUSSION boards, not mutual admiration boards. Discussion only occurs when we are willing to hear what others are thinking, regardless of whether it is alignment to our own thoughts.
I see you joined today just to post this diatribe. I suggest that you withdraw for a while and gain some perspective. And it's a script, not a screenplay.
It's not that some of your opinions lack merit or aren't interesting takes. And I understand that you're still in high school. But it's theater, where not everything can take place in real time. So go to college and study playwriting and maybe you'll win a Tony some day for a screenplay. I mean a book.
CZJ at opening night party for A Little Night Music, Dec 13, 2009.
LizzieCurry said: "ChenghisKhan said: "Continue reading, and give me some feedback on your thoughts about my version."
We're not your interns.
Also, the show is older than you, and while it has its problems, I don't think you're the one to solve them.
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Disregarding the baffling OP, I will say that I think I agree with the subject. I get that the spectacle is impressive but I cannot believe there is another production of this offensive, sexist, racist crap.
#RaisedOnMusicals alright fine: script. But do you at least get my point? I mean even though I am not an expert at drama, at least compared to most of the people on this forum, but still I know enough about drama to have have a say when analyzing them. After all, its really the plot that counts, not the acting and drama. Ok fine acting and drama also do count a lot as well, but the script is whats most important. And no, I do not intend to ask the screenwriter to alter the original script, I'm just giving feedback and expressing opinion on the show. And I am not employing Michael Bay to remake Miss Saigon. I'm just wondering what you people will think if the play was more historically realistic, adding the bombs and skirmishes.
I understand war without having to be hit over the head with "war things".
If we're not having fun, then why are we doing it?
These are DISCUSSION boards, not mutual admiration boards. Discussion only occurs when we are willing to hear what others are thinking, regardless of whether it is alignment to our own thoughts.
Alright; while I may not be very familiar with Theatrical terms and vocabulary, I am still familiar enough with Theater itself to be able to be able to have a say regarding it.
Ok, but are we all just going to act like Miss Saigon isn't super problematic? I enjoyed it, but it definitely has some problems with it's writing. I get that the OP wasn't necessarily the most eloquent in their analysis of the show, but can we not act like they're a troll just because they share a different opinion.
Dave28282 said: "ChenghisKhan said: "Continue reading, and give me some feedback on your thoughts about my version.
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I think it's very important for the story to start with the Engineer and the girls.
I also think your "version" is a rambling rant of a highschool kid who has played too many computer games.
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Ok I'm not a computer game crazed critic who thinks that every play should incorporate or feature, well, "video game drama," if that's what you would call my ideas. I don't even play video games, GODDAMMIT! But, like I said at least just one battle should be included in the play. Like I said, the play took place during the Vietnam WAR. And while no major battles that involved planes dropping bombs on villages, its at least better to incorporate them, rather than what Miss Saigon actually reenacted. At least, it would make the show more intense and give the characters a more "valiant" and "heroic" character.