Writing a New Play

[Shunterk]

So, I'm working on a new play. Well, more like editing. But regardless, I'll be finished with this next draft in a few weeks and I'm planning on having a read through, but I'm interested in having some more theatrically-inclined people read and review it for me. It's a celebration of storytelling and Southern American Gothic culture. A girl and her mother are on vacation while father is on a tour in the Navy. When they meet a nearby father and son everyone's life expectancy changes.

(I know that's a horrible elevator pitch.)

I'm an architecture student so everything is very, visually oriented. Thusly dialogue is really where I struggle the most. PM me if you're interested. I'm on here a lot, just never much of a poster.